Glossary entry

French term or phrase:

Je pense à quand

English translation:

I'm thinking about when you...

Added to glossary by Lisa Jane
May 10, 2017 17:06
7 yrs ago
French term

Je pense à quand

Non-PRO French to English Marketing Marketing / Market Research Testimonial video for human-rights organisation
Hi,

I'm translating a video testimonial for a human-rights organisation from French into British English and am having trouble with a phrase due to the tricky phrasing in the sentence. Please see the whole section of the section containing this phrase below. The organisation works to ensure that people's rights are upheld. In this section of the video, the director of the organisation's office in a country is speaking.

'Dans l’exercice de la profession d’avocat, il y a déjà énormément de choses quand on accepte de porter des dossiers qui sont particulièrement emblématiques pour faire avancer une cause. Je pense à quand on décide de s’attaquer à une entreprise multinationale, par exemple, qui viole les droits d’une communauté. Il faut du courage pour faire cela, parce qu’on sait qu’on expose aussi l’avocat au risque de rétorsions. Quand on s’attaque à un dictateur, d’un point de vue judiciaire, là aussi on est dans l’exercice noble de la profession d’avocat.'

Could someone help please? Many thanks!
Change log

May 10, 2017 17:56: Rachel Fell changed "Level" from "PRO" to "Non-PRO"

May 24, 2017 05:27: Lisa Jane Created KOG entry

Votes to reclassify question as PRO/non-PRO:

Non-PRO (3): writeaway, Michele Fauble, Rachel Fell

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Proposed translations

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1 hr
Selected

I'm thinking about when you...

or more conversational and paraphrasing slightly:

I mean when you...for example
Peer comment(s):

agree Graeme Jones
2 hrs
Thanks Graeme
agree Nikki Scott-Despaigne : The most natural rendering for the context.
15 hrs
Thanks Nikki
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Selected automatically based on peer agreement."
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1 hr

for example

I don't think a more literal translation, " I'm thinking of", works here. I know it says "par exemple" later on, but since it basically means the same as "je pense à quand", I'd combine the two and say:

"For example, suing a multinational company".

Also, you imply that these are subtitles, which are much more concise than speech.
Peer comment(s):

agree Victoria Britten
11 hrs
agree Verginia Ophof
19 hrs
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3 mins

I think of when one decides...

my take

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Note added at 1 hr (2017-05-10 19:05:30 GMT)
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Erratum: I AM THINKING instead of I think
Peer comment(s):

neutral writeaway : we'd probably use the present progressive in English
8 mins
neutral polyglot45 : and avoid "one" like the plague
46 mins
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